Spirit
Kit
Who says we're the only beings in the universe?
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Post by Spirit on Jul 18, 2008 6:58:17 GMT -5
PlotWhat if you could see the future? What if you could see the past? What if you had the powers... OF THE MOST POWERFUL POKEMON OF THEM ALL?One girl... Has to save the world.... From mother nature!!!
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What if the goverment was after you? What if is the main questian in this girl life, but will she make it to the day were mother nature unleashes one of it's most deadly forces?
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Spirit
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Who says we're the only beings in the universe?
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Post by Spirit on Jul 18, 2008 6:59:18 GMT -5
Chapter One A twelve year old girl was laying down in her bed. It was about four in the morning. Luna usually got up at this time. She sat up yawned and stretched a bit. Once that was done she got out of bed and went to the kitchen. Luna never knew her family and lived by herself away for human civilization.
Luna got a glass of milk, a napkin and a thing of poptarts. She sat down at the table and started eating. Right when she was down with this first poptart the door bell rang "anyone home?" It was a man's voice. Luna quickly finished her breakfast and cleaned up. Opening the door she found a man who looked like he was a man from the FBI. "who are you?" Luna asked thingying her head to one side.
"Name's Rodger. Is your mother or father, or a guardian here?" The man asked. "no, just me." Luna replied. Rodger looked suprised. "don't you have any family at all? He thingyed his head to the right. "no sir." Luna replied. "hm... why don't yopu come live with me?" He asked. Luna thought for a moment. Finally she said. "ok."
Rodger lead Luna to a mini van. He opended the back door and Luna hooped in. After a hour and 30 minutes of driving they finally arived at a two story house. "oh my gosh." Luna said slowly in amazment. "Rodger opened the door and when they were inside Rodger boomed. "I'm home!" In no time at all two kids abou 11 came running down the hall. One of them noticed Luna.
"who's that?" Then the wife came in and saw Luna as well. "I just saw a house, no car, but movement inside so i went to chek it out and found this girl living alone." "ooo What's that?" the other 11 year old said reaching for Luna's neck less. "Amaya stop acting like a 7 year old." Their mother snapped.
"We uh, never got your name?" "Taylor, the wife asked. "Name's Luna." Luna replied. "That's a nice name." Rofger said smiling. "My name's Payton!" The first 11 year old added. Luna just nodded. "Mom can we show her the rest of the house?" Payton asked. "yeah can we?" Amaya added. "what do you think Rodger?" Taylor asked. "ah go ahead."
Amaya jumped up and down while payton grabbed Luna by the rm and gave her the tour of the house. When they were gone Taylor asked. "does she really have no family?" Rodger nodded his head. "Afriad so." Sighing Taylor paced around a bit. "there's got to be someone she can't just live by herself, i mean i think she might be able to but."Taylor sighed again. "have you noticed anything strange about her? i mean with the charm neck less ect." Rodger also sighed. "I think your just imagening things. Come on lets see how the kids are doing, probably half way done."
Luna then Payton then Amaya came out. "what's wrong?" Taylor asked. "we just asked if see could show us a trick." Payton said. "She said she could but couldn't show us." Amaya added. "because you'll freak out like what the heck? ect." Luna replied."we won't!" Amaya said. "really." Payton added again. Taylor had a confused look on but it went away.
"one question. do you like foxes?" Luna asked. Rodger was also confused. "yeah why?" "i'll show you." Luna said then closing her eyes, consentrating. after a few moments a circle of wind surrounded Luna's feet then her charm glowed. It only took a few seconds before she turned into a ninetales. A fox with nine tails.
"cool!" Amaya and Payton squealed. Taylor and Rodger how ever looked quite suprised.Lune tranceformed back into her normal form, all taylor could say was. "woow." Rodger looked stunned. "wait." Amaya said after another few moments. "that was a pokemon right? they arn't suppose to exist." Everyone in the room exept for amaya and Luna looked stunned. "and it's only 6:30 in the morning." taylor finally said.
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Post by Night of No Stars on Jul 18, 2008 14:51:41 GMT -5
Oh noes a douple post! o.O Lol, I think it's awesome Spirit.
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Spirit
Kit
Who says we're the only beings in the universe?
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Post by Spirit on Jul 18, 2008 18:18:57 GMT -5
if i'm not to lazy i might make chapter two and acually finish XD
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Post by Night of No Stars on Jul 18, 2008 20:38:12 GMT -5
Lol... I hope you do.
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Post by silverleaf on Jul 21, 2008 16:59:44 GMT -5
yah..i didn't read it! HAha but i bet it's good
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Post by Jayfoot(Stoneclaw) on Jul 22, 2008 15:02:59 GMT -5
nice job spirit i like it
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Post by Jayfoot(Stoneclaw) on Jul 22, 2008 15:04:28 GMT -5
nice job spirit i like it
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Post by Jayfoot(Stoneclaw) on Jul 22, 2008 15:04:56 GMT -5
nice job spirit i like it
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Post by saberheart101 on Nov 13, 2011 12:01:01 GMT -5
why did you reapeat yourself? There was no need.
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